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Please, could you check it for me. Thaank you!:) "Fire regulations According to fire safety regulations, alarms and smoke detectors must be fitted in my business to detect fires in their earliest stages and sound a loud warning alarm. To protect my business and workers I also want to train everyone within the business how to identify fire hazards (what could burn? How could a fire start?) and what action must be take upon hearing a fire alarm. Sources of advice Running own business is not as easy as some people think. There are many sources of advice and support which are available for owners. For example: • The department of Trade and Industry It is a United Kingdom government department which provides a wide range of stat-up support, advice and information. • Websites In the Internet there are many websites which offer support to employers. For example: www.better-business.co.uk, www.smallbusinessadvice.org.uk •Business Link It is a free business advice and support service which is available through local advisers and online. •Federation of Small Businesses Provides help and advice on setting up a small business and offers accountancy service I should be careful using the Internet as a source of information because there are many websites which describe the rules and regulation in USA, and USA’s laws and regulations will vary from those in the UK. I also have to remember that some information in the Internet may be out of date or false. Licences and permits Some types of businesses may need licences, permits or registrations to operate and sell good or provide services. Some licence for nightclubs are obvious but For example a business which sell food between the hours of 11 pm and 5 am need a late hours catering licence To create a great atmosphere in ma coffee shop I want to play music for my customers however, is not as simple as many people think because if I have the radio on and play music, I am breaking the law as I do not have their license to do so in public. To make sure I do not break the law I will have to pay the performing rights to the Performing Rights Society."

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1. To create a great atmosphere {in ma} coffee shop I want to play music for my LOOK VERY LAST PARAGRAPH FIRST SENTENCE
2. Licences is spelled Licenses You wrote ma instead of my Some of your words need to be plural Your missing some words Other than that NICE REPORT!!!!!!
3. Fire regulations: According to fire safety regulations, alarms and smoke detectors must be fitted in my business to detect fires at their earliest stages and sound a loud warning alarm. To protect my business and workers,I also want to train everyone within the business how to identify fire hazards (what could burn? How could a fire start?) and what action must be taken upon hearing a fire alarm. Sources of advice: Running your own business is not as easy as some people think. There are many sources of advice and support which are available for owners. For example: • The department of Trade and Industry It is a United Kingdom government department which provides a wide range of start-up support, advice and information. • Websites On the Internet ,there are many websites which offer support to employers. For example: www.better-business.co.uk, www.smallbusinessadvice.org.uk •Business Link It is a free business advice and support service which is available through local advisers and online. •Federation of Small Businesses Provides help and advice on setting up a small business and offers accountancy service. I should be careful using the Internet as a source of information because there are many websites which describe the rules and regulations in USA, and USA’s laws and regulations will vary from those in the UK. I also have to remember that some information on the Internet may be out of date or false. Licences and permits : Some types of businesses may need licences, permits or registrations to operate and sell goods or provide services. Some licence for nightclubs are obvious but ,For example a business which sells food between the hours of 11 pm and 5 am need a late hours catering licence To create a great atmosphere in my coffee shop, I want to play music for my customers. However, it is not as simple as many people think because if I have the radio on and play music, I am breaking the law as I do not have their license to do so in public. To make sure I do not break the law, I will have to pay the performing rights to the Performing Rights Society."
4. there in the first paragraph not their advisers=advisors in the internet should be on the internet
5. That's goooood! But should it be ; "Sources of advice Running YOUR own business" and " - Websites ON the Internet " and "Some types of businesses may need licences, permits or registrations to operate and sell GOODS or provide services. Some LINCENSES for nightclubs are obvious but (No capitalisatiion->) For example a business which SELLS food between the hours of 11 pm and 5 am NEEDS a late hours catering licence" and "MY coffee shop " Hope it helps xo
6. "Fire regulations According to fire safety regulations, alarms and smoke detectors must be fitted in my business to detect fires in their earliest stages and to sound a loud warning alarm. To protect my business and workers, I also want to train everyone within the business about how to identify fire hazards (what could burn? How could a fire start?) and what action must be take upon hearing a fire alarm. Sources of advice Running my own business is not as easy as some people think. There are many sources of advice and support which are available for owners. For example: • The department of Trade and Industry It is a United Kingdom government department which provides a wide range of stat-up support, advice and information. • Websites In the Internet there are many websites which offer support to employers. For example: www.better-business.co.uk, www.smallbusinessadvice.org.uk •Business Link It is a free business advice and support service which is available through local advisers and online. •Federation of Small Businesses Provides help and advice on setting up a small business and offers accountancy service. I should be careful using the Internet as a source of information because there are many websites which describe the rules and regulation in USA, and USA’s laws and regulations will vary from those in the UK. I also have to remember that some information in the Internet may be out of date or false. Licences and permits Some types of businesses may need licences, permits or registrations to operate and sell good or provide services. Some licences for nightclubs are obvious but for example a business which sells food between the hours of 11pm and 5am need a late hours catering licence. To create a great atmosphere in my coffee shop I want to play music for my customers however, it is not as simple as many people think because if I have the radio on and play music, I am breaking the law as I do not have their license to do so in public. To make sure I do not break the law I will have to pay the performing rights to the "Performing Rights Society." There you go. nothing major just a few full stops and stuff its always nice to have someone else to read it through for you
7. 'The department of Trade and Industry' - u shud make the 'd' for department capital - Department 'To create a great atmosphere in ma coffee shop' - 'ma' needs correcting. 'which describe the rules and regulation in USA' - shud be regulations I think thats all!
8. "Fire regulations According to fire safety regulations; both alarms and smoke detectors must be fitted in my business so as to detect fires at the earliest possibility and alert individuals by sounding a loud warning alarm. To protect my business and workers, it would be benficial to train eemployees in the identification of fire hazards (e.g. What could burn? How could a fire start?) and the actions that must be take upon hearing a fire alarm. Sources of advice Advice to business owners is available from a variety of sources, such as; • The Department of Trade and Industry A United Kingdom government department which provides a wide range of stat-up support, advice and information. • Websites There are many websites which offer support to employers. For example: www.better-business.co.uk, www.smallbusinessadvice.org.uk • Business Link This is a free business advice and support service which is available through local advisers and online. • Federation of Small Businesses Provides help and advice on setting up a small business and offers an accountancy service When using the internet, it is important to remember that it is not always a trustworthy source of information. Many websites describe rules and regulations that are applicable to the USA and not the UK, which would not be useful. Websites may also be out of date, or provide false information. Licenses and Permits Some types of businesses may need licences, permits or registrations to operate, sell good or provide services. For example, a business which sells food between the hours of 11.00pm and 5.00am needs a late hours catering license. In order to create a pleasant atmosphere for customers of the coffee shop, music could be played. If a radio is used to provide such entertainment, a license would need to be attained so as not to break the law. To avoid breaking the law, performing rights would need to be payed towards the Performing Rights Society. If this is a report, you should avoid using words like 'me' and 'I'.